Talk:Character Challenge Writing Contest: September Edition/@comment-27539786-20150907055356/@comment-5142966-20150930015449

Ideas/Organization Content: 18. It bugs me how you straight out forgot to mention her country of origin and how old she was when she started bending. that's like app writing 101. it was sort of boring to read and wasn't all that great.

Style/Voice: 10, there wasn't detail and while I understand the desire to make a cool assassin, that's not the point of this contest is it?

Word Choice: eh full points I guess.

Convention: This too

Total Points: 58