Board Thread:Citizenship Applications/@comment-26954097-20150907041847/@comment-5142966-20150907043248

Oh boy...

Okay now for starters you need to explain where she was raised. Air Nomads is very vague since they could've been traveling or living in one of the 4 temples around the world.

Two paragraphs is definitely too short, go into more detail with her childhood and what not. Please read over the mock app since you're missing some vital stuff here.