Board Thread:Citizenship Applications/@comment-30881236-20161230233616

Character Application Reupload

Thanks for the reviews guys, I appreciate it. This is the newly edited application and I'd appreciate it even more if you review it.

Character Name: Zeref (No last name)

Title: Black Dragon, Yin Dragon

Bender Type: Fire

Age: 19

Appearance: [1] Erik Stryker

Zeref has unkempt and wavy black hair and grey eyes that glint with coldness. Zeref is young with no facial hair. He has a strong build and is clad in all black with fireproof and extremly durable material. His right peck, right rib, and right arm is completly covered in black. (The effects of his medical problem, see NOTICE.) His wristbands contain hidden blades that are soaked in his own finely made poison, he uses them to quickly assassinate his targets. His face is always hidden in his hood. Personality: Before Zare's death, Zeref was a kind and compassionate boy who was rather "wimpy". But after Zare's death, Zeref became colder and cut off all emotional ties he had. He became darker and felt no restraint to kill. Zeref further fell into the darkness when he found out the Rebellion's plans about Zeref. This clouded Zeref's mind with the goal of retribution and nothing else. Throughout his life Zeref was always leaning to an introverted side.

History: Zeref was born in poverty in Fire Nation Capital in the Fire Nation. Unable to take care of him, his mother and father anonymously gave him up when he was only 3 months, giving him no memories of his biological parents. He was then adopted by Zare, a firebender scientist who was researching in the hidden locked potential inside all beings, benders and non-benders alike. Zare was also determined to make Zeref stronger than ever, for Zare secretly plotted to have Zeref assassinate the Avatar, this was to shift the scales for the Rebellion, who Zare secretly supported. Unfortunately, Zeref was rather mediocre at firebending. It just wasn't natural for him. It was nearly impossible for Zeref to reach Zare's standards, making Zare angry and abusing Zeref.

When Zeref was 16, Zare's anger broke and Zare secretly experimented on Zeref illegally, torturing and operating on Zeref relentlessly, traumatizing Zeref. Zare used his previous research and inserted an ancient lacrima into Zeref, opening the secret potential that Zeref had inside of him. This lacrima transformed Zeref into an extremly skilled firebender, with the unique ability to create black fire, a legendary fire that was thought to be everlasting and devastatingly powerful. It was even thought that it was alive, able to sense fear and devour it. Zeref was now stronger than ever, and realizing his power, Zeref immediately was scared. Zeref did not want to hurt anyone. So when Zare ordered Zeref to travel to Republic City and kill the Avatar, Zeref was horrified and didn't want to do it. Zare threatened and abused Zeref more and more that Zeref broke and accidently killed Zare with his fire, burning Zare alive. The noise came out and the justice/military force came there, and seeing Zeref's power, decided to kill Zeref. After killing Zare, Erik's mind rebooted and his point of view of life changed. That night, Zeref slaughtered all the guards and fled out of the Fire Nation.

For the next few years Zeref took up the life of the mercenary and journeyed across all nations completing contracts. Throughout all nations he was only heard as a legend o myth- The Black Dragon or The Yin Dragon. But on his last contract, he was assigned to kill a waterbending scientist in the Northern Water Tribe. Erik found out that this scientist was connected to Zare and that they were both connected to the Rebellion, and that Zare had consipirated with the Rebellion to use Zeref as the ultimate weapon for the Rebellion and bring the Rebellion to victory. Zeref, full of hate, dug deeper and found out that there were Rebellion leaders hiding in Republic City planning a massive ambush for the Rebellion to take over the city. Filled to the brim with a burning urge to seek vengeance on the Rebellion, Zeref decided to leave for Republic City to kill the Rebellion leaders and begin his quest for revenge. His way out of the Northern Water Tribe was via a ferry that would take him to his desired destination, and to his retribution. When the looming structures came into view, Zeref could only think of his revenge. Zeref had arrived in Republic City.

NOTICE- Zeref's unique black fire ability also comes with a toll. As he uses more of his power, the lacrima slowly runs out of energy. So, as an adaption, the lacrima slowly takes energy from Zeref's own body's cells, killing the cell. The more Zeref exerts his power the more he is going to harm himself and decrease his lifespan. (This is why Zeref has hidden blades soaked in his own finely made poison. He tends to mainly use those to fight and complete his assasination contracts.)

Character Alignment: Neutral Amoral

Sexuality: Heterosexual

Height: 6'2 