Board Thread:Citizenship Applications/@comment-24149269-20150110155202/@comment-24149269-20150111144014

TehHarvester wrote: Okay, grammar and spelling could use a touch up, 3 is too young to learn bending - 4 is the youngest. The history is supposed to end on arrival in republic city, not after spending time there. Otherwise, it's not bad. Ok so I can fix tha age. I was just explaining that when she got to Republic City she got a job quickly and how dangerous the city is.