Talk:Character Challenge Writing Contest: September Edition/@comment-9529751-20150904041905/@comment-5142966-20150930021211

Ideas/Organization/Content—40 points possible: 32, you forgot the bender age as well. but you did a good job of putting her on her path as a porn star and a member of SR. So nice work.

Style/Voice—30 points possible: Full Points since we were able to see the kind of person she grew up to be. which is the entire point of a history.

Word Choice / Sentence Fluency—20 points possible: 15. what astrid said.

Conventions—10 points possible: 8. what astrid said and it sorta bugs me how the last paragraph is a lil too long and should be separated imo.

Total Score: 85