Board Thread:Citizenship Applications/@comment-25929021-20150114141809/@comment-3542404-20150114150734

You need to expand the history by at least 3 times of what it is now as well as say when they started bending, and there's little-to-nothing on personality. It also helps to add a description even if you have an image to mention stuff like height, attire and eye colour.

Also, being born in Republic City is a slightly iffy choice as the whole point of the Citizen Project is about new people coming to Republic City, you may want to consider alternatives.