Board Thread:Citizenship Applications/@comment-27539174-20150930053412/@comment-3542404-20151001113246

Without even doing an in-depth read I can already tell you he really needs his personality expanded upon, no-one is that 2-dimensional, it also doesn't quite reflect his history: he learned from the Airbenders and yet he doesn't show himself to be even a little spiritual as a result. Appearance couldn't hurt to have some expansion either (i.e. actual text).

Minor grammatical errors.

History doesn't quite explain why he left for Republic City.