Talk:Character Challenge Writing Contest: September Edition/@comment-9529751-20150904041905/@comment-25406788-20150930020502

Ideas/Organization/Content—40 points possible: 30. A lot of basic aspects required in a character application were missing. It wasn’t treated much like a character application, considering the history leads to her experiences in republic city. Although, the history does a good job of explaining how she fell into the idea of becoming a porn star. It also gives good back ground, which supports the next category.

Style/Voice—30 points possible: Full points. With the detailed history, you’re able to see clearly the growth of the character. The idea of her being a porn star doesn’t seem completely irrational, and is completely reasonable. It gives you a good idea of her personality, without reading what was given.

Word Choice / Sentence Fluency—20 points possible: 15. I feel that her exhibitionist fetish could’ve been better described, though it was clear. There are some other words that I could think of, that would better describe the events surrounding her ex-boyfriend’s cheating.

Conventions—10 points possible: 9. Minor punctuation issues were found, though not drastic. Total: 84 points