Board Thread:Citizenship Applications/@comment-25938972-20141230201814/@comment-25401609-20150101024424

A few issues to address. One, to discover waterbending as late as nine is very rare and the reasons must be explained. Secondly, people are coming here as part of the citzenship project. It costs EP to do otherwise, so I'd suggest going over how she got here. Also, a thirteen year old girl with limited bending experience fought off triads and her fighting experience is school yard scraps? And she get into fights while being motherly at the same time? My Mary Sue alarm bells are screaming. Finally, history and personality are way too short. Personality should be at least a few sentances and history needs another couple of paragraphs.

But to chuck in a small fix, "Laurie and Kai"  aren't really inuit names. Baby steps, right? :P