Board Thread:Citizenship Applications/@comment-2110162-20170101035412/@comment-5142966-20170101083355

Okay so the history isn't terrible, but there are a few minor issues. I feel like there should be something written about his childhood, like give us some idea of what it's like. Also it's Earth Republic, not Kingdom. I'm a lil iffy on him refining ancient factories cuz it just seems to give him too much influence. But as long as you clarify it was a handful of them or something. I'd allow that.