Board Thread:Citizenship Applications/@comment-24019243-20141221082130/@comment-5142966-20141221083327

okay not a bad one, but your main issue is that he was born in Rep City. The Citizenship process is all about new people coming to the city from other countries. maybe say Zen's family was from the fire nation or earth republic and they moved to the city when he was little?

also I'm not sure about his alignment and main goal. like is he basically an equalist? is his hatred of benders personal vengeance or something he's doing for the greater good?