Board Thread:Archives/@comment-26273908-20150403175154/@comment-27539786-20150403194341

Kay, first of all. Spelling and Grammar. I can't stand it. Please fix it. Okay few problems. First. "This fact alone made his parents very proud which led to them pushing him harder and more frequent to mastering hia bending believing that he could be the next Fire Lord however all their pushing and harsh treating only did was allow Shén to grow to dispise them."

The fire lord isn't the best firebender in the nation. The fire lord comes from a long line of fire lords. This is stupid because it would never be ale to happen. He would NEVER be the fire lord.

Second, what eleven year old would ever be pushed into killing their parents? Is he mentally unstable? Because that'd literally be the only explanation.

NOBODY would keep a stowaway who killed his own parents at such a young age. Why did they follow his order to go to the North Pole? He's not important to them.

How did he hear of the Republic City? Explain his journey there.