Board Thread:Citizenship Applications/@comment-28321166-20151010021920/@comment-25931724-20151010040453

Ok not too bad but go into greater detail about Kyo's childhood and actuall give which tribe he is from North or the Wastes (south)? edit the history to match that of the tribe also (I suggest reading our history sections)

That's basically all you still need to do, other than that you are good