Board Thread:Citizenship Applications/@comment-9529751-20150829030413/@comment-5142966-20150829031418

Most of this is pretty fine, but the biggest issue would be her name. Aria isn't an asian name so you need to change it. Also she wouldn't have a last name unless she was rich and she's clearly not that rich. And chi-blocking is a power that comes in time, not something that can be learned in the char's history.

and please change "species" to "bender type", it's not like the different kinds of chars here are different species and what not.