Board Thread:Citizenship Applications/@comment-31244599-20170206100825/@comment-25931724-20170206210920

Ok this is a lot better but there are still a couple of issues.

We need the age he started bending and what caused his bending to manifest, a brief description of his parents at the start of his history, at least one more paragraph of personality information and personally I would prefer it if a little more detail went into the history.

But other than those it's a pretty good first attempt for a char app here. Good job