Thread:Raretyranid/@comment-6458789-20150125105440/@comment-6458789-20150125232848

Will you be finding a picture any time soon, or do you want me to help out? I'm not bad at finding character models.

As for the pet application, the spelling and grammar is pretty off, but that's easily fixed. The story could probably use some elaboration, such as the time Ulva and Iluq grew up together. You also need to capitalise at the beginning at each sentence and expand the personality of the dog.