Board Thread:Citizenship Applications/@comment-1295345-20141205230339/@comment-1295345-20141205233323

TheOrbitingStars wrote: The personality is a little too short. You also either need an image for your character or describe whathe looks like. How did he practice proper firebending if he lived around all water benders or non benders? Doesn't make sense and plus, he couldn't become that powerful. Why would he travel across the world? Expand on his journey to  Republic City. What does he plan to do to be this beacon of light? I thought I rather summarised his personality rather nicely in four words, what else do you need to know (plus I think I mention a bit more about his personality in the second paragraph)? Also i thought I gave a good bit of his appearance ("pale skin, bright eyes and golden hair"). Also is it so unfeasible that he is so naturally gifted that he could teach himself? And didn't I mention that he was exiled from his village? What else was he supposed to do after that happened?

As for how he plans to be a beacon of light, Guang hopes that he can be so well known and have such a high status that he can be an influence in the city