Board Thread:Citizenship Applications/@comment-25782423-20150101020200/@comment-25401609-20150101030906

A few issues. One, grammar. We don't need so many caps. And maybe some more full stops. If you could add another paragraph about how he came to Republic City, that would be great. Also, we are a little OCD about this, but it's no longer the Earth Kingdom. It's now the Earth Republic, but that's a very easy fix.