Board Thread:Citizenship Applications/@comment-25936513-20150102194513/@comment-25401609-20150102220454

Firstly, someone can hardly be single-minded and not belive in stuff, then be curious at the same time. That doesn't work. Both the personality and history could use some more stuff, I feel they're a little short. "Satish" doesn't sound asian enough to me, especially not chinese/japanese. Basically put any vowel on the end and it works though, so that's an easy fix. Finailly, I'd give this a once over. The spelling and grammar isn't the worst I've seen but it's a fair way from the best.