Board Thread:Citizenship Applications/@comment-25843616-20141210060038/@comment-27539786-20141210061116

Besides the horrible grammar in the entirety of the history, this is pretty good. Except for one thing. I'm not totally sure about teh whole mudbending thing? Because that's an advanced power, and you can't get that until after a month the character is created.

And, I don't understand why she left her home? Was it just to get away from her father? Did she feel unwelcome?

And also, for a four year old (Which is a tiny bit too early to have bending) probably wouldn't be able to control water well enough to mop a floor with it.

Can you fix these? Thanks <3